Monday, August 20, 2012

{Blog Critique-Viva La Vida Valentina}

Monday, August 20, 2012
Ever wonder what others think about your blog? I know I do and so does one of our curious reader: Amanda from Viva La Vida Valentina. Amanda  is a teenaged girl trying to find herself with makeup! She believes in the power of 42, finding American Pie, being Forever Young, and walking on a Stairway to Heaven. CTY-ers forever! (info taken from her blog)

Here's a great quote from her 'About Me' page:
Beneath the makeup and behind the smile I am just a girl who wishes for the world.
- Marilyn Monroe

After reviewing her blog, here's what I like:
-Like the two side bars. It keeps the blog clean and organized.
-Like the page labels
-Great pictures.
-Posts are very informative
-Love the swatches

Here's where I think she can Improve on:
-Need a banner.
-Some photos are too small and hard to see the details.
-Do you have a youtube channel? Would love to see some of your makeup routine. Example: Your 'The Moon Is Low Tonight' makeup.
-Maybe add labels to the different topics that you write on since you blog about more than just one topic. I am not exactly sure what you write about other than beauty...

Anything you'd like to add? Please let Amanda of Viva La Vida Valentina know by leaving a comment below.  Remember, constructive criticisms are welcome, but be nice! =)

1 comment:

  1. A banner would be a nice addition. Also enlarging the photo's would help the content layout seem neater. Other than that I'd say she's doing very well with it as is.